Group Edit of Music Video

Feedback for individual edit:


+ Good use of locations 
+ Good composition used in shots
+ Artist is established from the beginning of the shot till the end
+ Variety of shots used
+ Shots are synchronised with music
+ Artist makes eye contact at the camera, makes the audience feel emotionally engaged


However to improve:


- There was a glare in some of the shots which needs adjusting as the artists face was not visible
- The artists friend doesn't contribute to the video, could have been made more clear as to who he is
- Shots are repetitive


After this feedback myself and my group member had to create a final group edit.  My group member found my final outcome had more clarity of composition and thought mine was more synchronised, therefore we decided to put my music video forward as the final group edit.  However, I did have some improvements to be made so I took on my teacher's advice and changed the problems to the best of my ability.