Group Edit of Music Video

Feedback for individual edit:


+ Good use of locations 
+ Good composition used in shots
+ Artist is established from the beginning of the shot till the end
+ Variety of shots used
+ Shots are synchronised with music
+ Artist makes eye contact at the camera, makes the audience feel emotionally engaged


However to improve:


- There was a glare in some of the shots which needs adjusting as the artists face was not visible
- The artists friend doesn't contribute to the video, could have been made more clear as to who he is
- Shots are repetitive


After this feedback myself and my group member had to create a final group edit.  My group member found my final outcome had more clarity of composition and thought mine was more synchronised, therefore we decided to put my music video forward as the final group edit.  However, I did have some improvements to be made so I took on my teacher's advice and changed the problems to the best of my ability.  

Final Digi Pak Design

I wanted my digipak design to look as professional as it could, so I was attempting to create it on Photoshop as this enables you to edit pictures, crop them and change original locations etc.  However I found photoshop really hard and complicated to use, so I created mine on word, however I am still pleased with my outcome.  Below is my final 6 panel digipak design:

Evaluative Commentry

Myself and my group member have set up a website where we will evaluate our final outcome of the music video which we created. We will be discussing what new technologies we used, how we ended up with out outcome, how we overcame and issues etc.  


To view our Evaluative Commentary website click on the link below;


http://www.wix.com/marveyg/evaluative-commentry-2012